I always love games that make me cry and this game made me cry. Really cute characters and a wonderful story. It really captured how mundane a routine can feel sometimes for me.
Awww, this is such a sweet story! I enjoyed reading it! The ending pulled at my heartstrings, but it was nicely done. And the sprite movement whenever David and Ron interacted was super cute.
I loved this story! Moving, cute, with a touch of fantasy... The ending is a tad bittersweet for my taste, though, but I understand it fits the protag, so he can move on and make his way in life.
A short and sweet VN with likable characters. The edited photos work suprsingly well as backgrounds and the music is pretty relaxing. The sprites and their movements are also really adorable. Thumbs up!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'm happy to hear the photo backgrounds worked out okay too. I spent a looooot of time browsing through all kinds of creative commons photo galleries trying to find something like what I had imagined.
Jane & I helped each other out on our VNs for Yaoi Jam, so I might seem a little biased here, but I really love this VN. It's very cute and her character writing is fantastic.
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Isn't there a Spanish version?
A Very adorable Visual Novel!
Very sweet, tho the end was sad :(
I always love games that make me cry and this game made me cry. Really cute characters and a wonderful story. It really captured how mundane a routine can feel sometimes for me.
Awesome story! Didn't end at all how I expected, ended better! Adorable aswell!
Amazing little story! The character designs were so cute, and though the ending was bittersweet af, it was a wonderful read. Thank you!
This was absolutely gorgeous, loved the story, loved the characters. You did such an amazing job!
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Awww, this is such a sweet story! I enjoyed reading it! The ending pulled at my heartstrings, but it was nicely done. And the sprite movement whenever David and Ron interacted was super cute.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I had so much fun playing around with the sprite movement. :D
Such a cute and wholesome story! I loved how you developed the characters. The foreshadowing was also a nice touch! 5/5!
Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!
I loved this story! Moving, cute, with a touch of fantasy... The ending is a tad bittersweet for my taste, though, but I understand it fits the protag, so he can move on and make his way in life.
Fully recommendable!
Thanks for reading! :)
A short and sweet VN with likable characters. The edited photos work suprsingly well as backgrounds and the music is pretty relaxing. The sprites and their movements are also really adorable. Thumbs up!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'm happy to hear the photo backgrounds worked out okay too. I spent a looooot of time browsing through all kinds of creative commons photo galleries trying to find something like what I had imagined.
Seriously nice work with this game!!
The choice in music was great, and I seriously loved the little sprite animations. When David inches closer to Ron, awww man that was cute.
The story is very well written. I kind of figured out who Ron was at the start but I still enjoyed reading their interactions. Ron is just too cute.
Overall, great job!!!
Thanks Red! I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun messing with the sprite movement. :)
this was so sweet, and had a great blend of realism and fantasy! that made me feel a bit like i was falling in love with ron to <3
Thanks! Ron is a sweetheart. :D
This is super cute~!!! Definitely a unique and magical read~ <3
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Jane you did a good game. Love your writing and the art was fantastic too.
Great work on the vn!
Favorite character was Marty's ducktie. Quack quack.
Aww thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :) Marty's tie is great, Ravi did such a good job with the art.
Jane & I helped each other out on our VNs for Yaoi Jam, so I might seem a little biased here, but I really love this VN. It's very cute and her character writing is fantastic.
Aww thanks! If you enjoy this VN, you should check out Bishounen's Yaoi Jam entry Strawberry Daiquiri as well. :D